Update on Huntress' Book

NOT IN BOOK---- Hello, many of you know i am making a book, this is a thread where i will be posting my latest book updates, and please do not think i will not take opinions/help, i want that.

IN BOOK---

The Bomb
Boom! The world shook like thunder, and sprayed blood everywhere, me and Joel, we go for our dads. “Dad!” I yell in the pitch-black darkness, “Dad!” I yell again… no answer. Me and Joel run out of the rising smoke. We see hundreds, if not, thousands of Elves in the clearing of smoke. We search high and low for our dads, but… nothing.
5 years later…
“Joel, I want to go to…earth.” I said, “We are 15 now, no parents, no Elvin Empire we can go back to, we need to go to earth, and start a new life.” Joel said, “I don’t think that is a very good…” They were there, standing right under our noses but we did not even know it. “Nice to see you again, Ester!” said Qwimby, the 18 year old bully, I got him off us the last time, 2 years ago, but he has changed, but so have I. He was my foster brother, but I ran away, and my foster parents never came back after me. Then, while I went to go pick up my Staff, he struck me across the face, Joel did not notice, Qwimby’s friends had him busy with his sword. I crawled with ferocious speed to my staff, and picked it up to block another blow of his hand. His hand hit the bud of my staff, and his face lit with anger, he grabbed his sword from its sheath, and tried to strike at me, but I always had ferocious speed, I parried his blow, and struck him in the chest with the bud of my staff. He flew backwards into his friends, Frewin and Groton. He then said, “I will get you next time!” And sheathed his sword then ran away, with his friends. I was the only one, save Joel, who was an elf-human hybrid, in Ciudad Del Diablo, where I have grown up since I was 10. I never knew my actual mother, but I guessed she was a human. My father rarely talked about her, and when he did, Inez, my stepmother, threw a vase at him. “I will go and get Inwe and Tamari.” I said. I ran my fastest then when I found them, they were in an ally and Qwimby was about to strike. “Ah!” I screamed as I charged at him with the bud of my staff aimed at his hip bone. Crack! His bone snapped in two, he yelped with anger and pain in his eyes. He was about to kill me when Tamari, took her dagger and pounded its sheath on his head. Tamari was an Elf-Angel hybrid, she was the most beautiful elf in the world, I thought. When she would spread her beautiful, pale-white wings out across her back, she looked like an angel. I hurried them back to the farmhouse where I, Tamari, Inwe, and Joel lived. We were a close family. “Joel,” I said, “I have decided, I should go back to Del Elvin Empire, and finish helping them build.” Joel said regretfully, “Ok, but swear that you will not do anything stupid, and get killed.” “I swear.” I said. We hugged our goodbyes, and then departed after I got my bag all together. Then I left.
Rough Journey
It was a very long journey, I only got a quarter of the way there, when I heard something in the bushes, it must be a rabbit, I thought, but then something struck me flat against the floor, I grabbed my sword out of its sheath by my waist, but before I could react, an…Elf was standing on me. I was so surprised to see one of my own. “Who are you…?” “Shut up!” He roared in a whisper, “They are here and waiting to ambush you, come here!” He drug me into the trees of Hartybok Forest. “We will talk when we reach Mitiladorn, ok?” He said. I knew that name, I didn’t know where, but I knew that name. We walked for hours until we finally got to Mitiladorn. When we got there, the elf said, “Hello, I am Lumari, Elf Ambassador, and Head Archer, we are glad I got to you in time, before they got you.” “Who…?” I said, “Who were they, and why did they want to capture me?” Then the elf said, “It is not safe to talk here, let me just say… I know your mother.” That shook the questions about who the people waiting to ambush me were out of my mind, when the questions, who is she entered my mind. We hurried to a tree field and into a hut inside a small village, then Lumari whispered a few slight words then said, “No one can hear us now, I can answer the questions you have as best as I can.” I then said, “What is my mother?” Lumari looked a little shocked then said, “Why, don’t you know?” I shook my head then he continued on, “She is the most beautiful Elf-Eagle in the world.” My mouth hung open. My mother is an Elf-Eagle! They are known as the fiercest warriors in the whole Empire! I wonder if I am an Elf-Eagle, or as I used to call them, Elgles. Oh, if I could just see her. “Can I see her?” I screamed at the top of my lungs. Then his expression darkened, “I am afraid not, she is in the world of battle at the moment.”I could feel tears stinging into my eyes. I couldn’t see her? “But… Where is she?” I asked. He said in a mourning tone, “I am sorry, but… you cannot know that, it is confidential information.” I took my sword out from its sheath then held it up to his neck and said, “I will not take no for an answer, tell me!” He sighed like he didn’t care if he dies then said, “She is in Kirilto Meadow, fighting 10 feet giants, she is the leader of the Astro Rebels.” My mom was in charge of the Astro Rebels! They are the force that fights against The Lomoru, the evil force that controls the Council Empire. Then Lumari continued on saying, “She is also the Queen of Hartybok Forest, you are the prince, and only Elgles are part of the royal family. That is why your dad took you and fled to Yizup Village in Hujokin Woodlands. It was a very beautiful city, but they just lost their king of Hujokin Woodlads to the Lomoru, they then appointed your father to be king.”
“He was a great king, and we elves of Hartybok Forest were ashamed we couldn’t have him as our king, but he never let you visit your mother, when…” There was a burst at the door then it burst open and there stood in the doors place, a three foot dwarf, he said, “Lumari, we are under attack by the Lomoru, they sent 100 10 feet giants and 50 spell casters and 90 soldiers. We need your Rangers; our flank is not doing well.” Then Lumari replied, “Yes, Frid, I will send my rangers out right away.” When Frid was out of hearing distance, Lumari asked, “Do you want to fight or stay here? Your mom will be here any moment I sent her a message, she just finished defeating the 10 feet giants.” I took me not even one second to answer, I said, “I will do whatever I can to help, but it may not be much.” Lumari nodded, and then said, “Farid, I want you to go help Frid with his flank, me and Harked will be over in a moment.”
I hurried into my position with Frid, when I got there, there were not many dwarves there, but the few left fought with ferocious power and strength. I went inside to the fighting, right when I got into there, 10 soldiers came at me with their swords raised high, I dodged one and stabbed him in the chest with my sword, then I did the same with 8 others, but when I got to the last one, he knew what I was doing so he sidestepped and pierced me in the thigh, my eyes lit with anger when it pierced my thigh, I then took my sword swiped it across his head and it fell with a thump on the ground motionless.